[projectaon] 04tcod footnote issues
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Tue, 18 Oct 2011 13:42:19 -0700
On Sat, Sep 24, 2011 at 5:32 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 24 September 2011 09:55:46, Simon Osborne wrote:
>>
>> On 24/09/2011 02:19, Jonathan Blake wrote:
> Should "Maaken mines" be capitalised (i.e. Maaken Mines)?
The only place that it's capitalized is in our footnotes and in the
map for The Legacy of Vashna (which still has it incorrectly labelled
as "Maaken Miner"). However, it seems like it should be capitalized.
> 04tcod
>
> 22: Added "If you are using a Kalte Firesphere instead of a Torch, you will
> still lose an item as described as you fumble for the Firesphere in your
> pocket."
Leave it in the footnote, but let's remove the awkward "as described".
> 25: Added "You have entered the Wildlands beyond of the Pass of Moytura. You
> cannot use the Kai Discipline of Hunting to fulfil Meal requirements in this
> region of desolate wasteland."
Leave it as a footnote.
> 29: Added "(You need not erase any Torches from your Action Chart in this
> instance)." [sic]
Leave it as a footnote.
> 117: Added to the first option "(You may not use another Torch unless you
> have a Tinderbox as well. Also, you may use a Kalte Firesphere in place of a
> Torch and Tinderbox if you possess this Special Item)" [sic]
Leave it as a footnote.
> 120: Added as a second paragraph "You have now reached a location where the
> Kai Discipline of Hunting can be used once again to fulfil a Meal
> requirement."
I suggest we change our footnote:
At this point Hunting will again begin to fulfil the Meal requirement.
-> You may now begin to use Hunting once again to fulfil a requirement
to eat a Meal.
> 129: Added "(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Huntmastery, [sic] you are
> unable to use it within the Maaken [m]ines.)"
Add a note to our footnote that the Mongoose edition forbids the use of Hunting.
> 133: No change (though, see similar situation in Mongoose Book 3)
How about this: "Even when evading combat, you must still turn to 17
if you lose any ENDURANCE."
> 167: Replaced "the bottom of the mine wagon. Inside" with "the bottom of the
> mine wagon; if you wish to keep the Shovel, it takes up two Backpack places.
> Inside"
Leave it as a footnote.
> 171: Replaced "Mile after mile, you ride across the flat and desolate
> landscape surrounding the Ruanon Pike. Yet in spite of the uninspiring view,
> your men seem in fine spirits." with "This area of [the] Wildlands south of
> the Pass of Moytura is devoid of healthy flora and fauna and therefore you
> will be unable to use the Kai discipline [sic] of Hunting to fulfil any Meal
> requirements while you are in this region.//Despite the bleak and
> uninspiring surroundings they now find themselves in, your men seem to be in
> fine spirits."
Leave it as a footnote.
> 185: Added "If you possess the Kai discipline [sic] of Hunting, you are
> unable to use it to find food in this instance."
Add a note to our footnote that the Mongoose edition forbids the use of Hunting.
> 222: Added "Be sure to make a note of this Sword’s special significance. It
> is a normal Sword for all combat purposes."
Leave it as a footnote.
> 245: Deleted "Your other man is also now beyond all help."
But what if you came to 245 from 127 where you have that extra man.
Does this solve one problem and create another?
> 269: Added "If you possess the Kai discipline [sic] of Hunting, you are
> unable to use it when called upon to eat a Meal while you are in the Maaken
> [m]ines."
Add a note to our footnote that the Mongoose edition forbids the use of Hunting.
> 272: Added "If you possess two weapons, [sic] you may decide which one to
> lose." before "All of your"
Leave it as a footnote.
> 327: Added "(Remember to erase this Sword from your Action Chart.)"
Leave it as a footnote.
--
Jon
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