[projectaon] Re: 21votm graphics

  • From: Ingo Kloecker <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Thu, 16 Apr 2009 23:14:35 +0200

On Thursday 16 April 2009, Simon Osborne wrote:
> On 16/04/2009 18:58, Jonathan Blake wrote:
> > All (I think) of the Voyage graphics (oh! except for the lute) have
> > been committed to SVN.
>
> ...and uploaded to the test version of Book 21(e.g.
> <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/21votm/random.htm>)! :-)
>
> I guess now is as good a time as any to officially open the comment
> period, Jon? I'll try to get a playtest (or two) done tomorrow. If
> everyone would like to play through the book at least once, and
> report back any problems spotted, that would be a great help.
> <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/21votm/title.htm>

A few minor nit picks:

http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/21votm/kainame.htm

- It would be great if the table(s) was/were centered horizontally.
- There should be a bit space between the table(s) and the navigation 
bar.


http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/21votm/maplarge.htm

- The offset/misalignment of the two maps looks weird. It seems the 
actual maps (without the white border) are supposed to be aligned, but 
that's not really the case since the upper map is slightly larger than 
the lower map. I suggest extending the upper map a bit to the right 
such that it aligns with the right border of the white border of the 
lower map and correspondingly for the lower map and the left border of 
the upper map.


Regards,
Ingo

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