[projectaon] 28thos errata for 49-71
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 11:34:23 -0700
(er) 49: at the gallop -> at a gallop
Unusual, but still idiomatic. OK as-is.
(er) 54: you barge this portal open [lm: I only mention this because
of our earlier di scussion about 'barge' used as a transitive verb.
The usage here sounds correct to me.]
It sounds OK to me. We can't use the same language as last time: "barge into".
(er) 69: spare you any -> spare you from any
Sounds cromulent to me. OK as-is.
(er) 71, 136, 254: [lm: Ought the tomb robbers to get the illuminatus bonus?]
They are listed as "Tomb Robbers (with Kai Weapon)" so we have to
assume that the bonus, if it's appropriate, has already been applied
to their statistics. I understand that in the case of the Illuminatus,
the bonus would theoretically be slightly higher (+2 CS) because you
are underground. Do we want to footnote this? *ducks*
--
Jon
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