[projectaon] Re: Comment Period for Lone Wolf 1-7
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Tue, 25 Oct 2011 14:44:55 -0700
On Sat, Sep 24, 2011 at 6:25 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Shadow on the Sand:
> (Section 4) Replace second Option with "If the fight lasts longer than 4
> rounds and you win the combat, turn to 180."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 10) Added "Note down your possessions on a piece of paper in case
> you should find them later and then make the necessary adjustments to your
> Action Chart."
Leave as a footnote, but maybe change ours:
Current: "Make sure you note your possessions elsewhere in case you
should find them later."
Suggested: "Take note of your lost possessions elsewhere in case you
find them later."
> (Section 20) No change (though cf. Section 135 below).
>
> (Section 135) Replaced first Option with "If you win the combat, you may
> restore half of any ENDURANCE points you lose (fractions rounded down) and
> then turn to 130."
Change current footnotes:
Current: "It may be reasonable to restore half the ENDURANCE points
that you lose in this combat if you win (note what happens if you
lose)."
Suggested for 20: "Restore half of any ENDURANCE points that you lose
(fractions rounded down) during this combat if you win or evade (note
what happens if you lose)."
Suggested for 135: "Restore half of any ENDURANCE points that you lose
(fractions rounded down) during this combat if you win (note what
happens if you lose)."
Also, move the footnote marker in 20 to before the combat.
> (Section 31) Append "(you do not require any of your own Torches to use the
> Tinderbox in this instance)" to Option 1.
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 35) Added "Note that the Jewelled Mace is a weapon-like Special
> Item."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 56) Replaced "the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia. You are elated"
> with "the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia; you may record the Jakan on your
> Action Chart as a Weapon. The bow [sic] may be of further use to you
> sometime in the future. You are elated"
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 58) Added "The section corresponding to the correct answer will
> inform you that you have made the correct choice. If you should happen to
> choose an incorrect section, then do not return here. Go instead to Section
> 156 [we decided 98 was better]. You only have one chance to use the correct
> number."
>
> ** Unless otherwise desired, I'll gloss over further "puzzle footnotes"
> (both turning from and turning to) as we should keep them as footnotes.
Agreed that we should leave as footnotes.
> (Section 69) Replaced "discomfort." with "discomfort--erase from your Action
> Chart all Weapons, Special Items, Gold Crowns, and your Backpack but note
> them down elsewhere in case you should find them later."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 91) Replace second Option with "If the fight lasts longer than 4
> rounds and you win the combat, turn to 180."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 154) Added "You may purchase any of the above and in any quantity
> you desire, although you are limited by the number of items you can carry in
> your Backpack."
Given this, I'd argue that the footnote is unnecessary.
> (Section 168) Replaced second option with "If the fight lasts longer than 3
> rounds and you emerge the victor, turn to 46."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 176) Added "Make the necessary adjustments to your Action Chart and
> list all the items that have been confiscated on a separate piece of paper,
> for reference in case you should discover them again later in your
> adventure."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 221) Altered Option 1 to "If you have ever received a Crystal Star
> Pendant, regardless of whether or not you possess it now, turn to 336."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 239) Appended to the first Option "You may only use Graveweed in
> its Tincture form in this instance. You cannot make use of a concentrated
> Graveweed potion, if you should happen have one."
Leave as a footnote (but get rid of the comma).
> (Section 288) Altered Option 1 to "If you have ever received a Crystal Star
> Pendant, regardless of whether or not you possess it now, turn to 399."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 320) Added "If you possess the Kai discipline [sic] of Hunting, you
> are unable to make use of it in this desert wasteland to satisfy your
> requirement for food."
Change our footnote:
Current: "Since you are in the middle of a wasteland, you may not use
Hunting to get out of the Meal requirement here."
Suggested: "You may not use Hunting if required to eat a Meal in the
middle of this wasteland."
> (Section 331) Added "To solve this puzzle correctly, you will need to use
> the Map with the above code instructions in mind before coming back to this
> section. The three-digit section corresponding to the correct answer will
> state that it is the correct solution to this puzzle. If you do not see this
> note, you have chosen the wrong section, in which case you should return to
> this section and reconsider the code before making your selection again."
Remove "There is no alternate way to proceed through the adventure."
from our current footnote.
> (Section 350) Added "(Erase the Sommerswerd temporarily from your Action
> Chart. You may restore it to your inventory once the adventure is over)."
> [sic]
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 373) Added in itals and centred "This section is the correct answer
> to the code puzzle posed in Section 331."
Leave as a footnote.
> (Section 382) Altered Option 1 to "If you have ever received a Crystal Star
> Pendant, regardless of whether or not you possess it now, turn to 399."
Leave as a footnote.
--
Jon
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