[projectaon] Re: Comment Period for Lone Wolf 1-7
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 7 Dec 2011 14:30:20 -0800
The following is a record of what I did for 01fftd:
On Fri, Sep 23, 2011 at 2:54 PM, Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On Fri, Sep 23, 2011 at 1:00 AM, Benjamin I Krefetz
> <krefetz@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
>> 01fftd
>>
>> 137: Replace third sentence with "If you wish to gather up and keep these
>> gems, mark them on your Action Chart as '20 Tomb Guardian Gems' (together
>> they take up only 1 space in your Backpack)."
>
> I think we should only change the footnote to say it is a Backpack
> Item. We could alternatively add it parenthetically.
20 Gems -> 20 Tomb Guardian Gems
mark these on your Action Chart -> mark these on your Action Chart as
a single Backpack Item
Removed footnote.
>> 181: Joe reworked the section, and there's no mention of lost weapons and
>> equipment.
>> 205: After first sentence add "(You must now erase all weapons and backpack
>> items from your Action Chart.)"
>
> These two go together. One difference seems to be that Mongoose only
> requires you to discard Weapons and Backpack Items, not Special Items
> and Gold Crowns. We could add the sentence to 205 and remove the
> offending sentence from 181: "You have lost your Weapons and
> Equipment, but not your life."
181 was already changed, but I made the addition to 205 and removed
our footnote.
>> 304: Joe reworked and expanded the whole section.
>
> Leave footnote as-is.
Left as is.
I'm really missing the Emacs errata program right now. I switched to a
Dvorak keyboard a couple years ago, and Emacs became unusable (unless
I went to the trouble of remapping all the control sequences). Using
Vi now, but this makes me wish I still used Emacs.
--
Jon
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