I played through it, and used Jon's svgz to help me explore several paths, so that I got to 'play' it as completely as I could. I only have two comments really, otherwise it seemed sound. In section 168, it says "Rouf rushes into the cabin to untie his kin..." however, no matter which option you follow in this section, you end up being the first to go into the cabin, for example, Section 49: "... they see Rouf following behind you." You can't even say that Rouf went in, untied them, then came back out again, because he would have warned his kin about your attire. My second comment, and now, this is the first New Order book I've taken the trouble to play through so this may have been discussed before, but several times in the book, it reminds you that you could benefit from a specific Kai weapon if you possess it, for example, in section 182: "If your Kai Weapon is ‘Alema’ or ‘Kaistar’, you may add the appropriate bonus gained from their unique properties." My inclination was to then try and find the original table of these Kai weapons. Granted that people may be noting the benefits of their weapon in their action charts, but I thought that perhaps a link back to the Kai weapon table would be useful. That's all I could come up with. Thanks Sam ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at http://www.freelists.org/list/projectaon