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From: Sergio Almeida alforewuanne@xxxxxxxxx
Date: 20:09:06 on Thursday, July 18, 2019
Subject: Dead in the Deep
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Hello Project Aon.
Having read Dead in the Deep I can tell you that compared to Dever there was a
lot more writing per passage. Dever was better at saying more things with less
words. You have to take care to make the adventure more clear. Good attempt
however.
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