[projectaon] [Fwd: Re: Project Aon Contact Form:]
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 04 Aug 2005 15:51:23 +0100
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Subject: Re: [projectaon] Project Aon Contact Form:
Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2005 15:47:31 +0100 (BST)
Tried sending this via PA's contact form and got "connection error"
messages. Huh?
Apologies for the non-standard method of flagging up dashes. This is a
result of not knowing how to type dashes on a Mac!
(er) 01hh 100: uppermost in your mind, and -> uppermost in your mind and
(er) 01hh 100: at its peak, everyone -> at its peak everyone
(ne) 01hh 101: At 200 yards... [NJM: dashes.]
(ne) 01hh 105: You bury the bodies... [NJM: dashes.]
(ne) 01hh 105: It leads to the ruins... [NJM: dash.]
(er) 01hh 105: gulley -> gully
(er) 01hh 105: 'the Day' -> 'The Day'
(er) 01hh 115: Stake-out -> Stake-Out
(er) 01hh 117: gulley -> gully
(ft) 01hh 122 [NJM: I think a footnote should be added, either here or in
Section 163, allowing retrieval of the knife after combat.]
(ne) 01hh 127: Fortunately... [NJM: dashes.]
(er) 01hh 127: exclaim, excitedly -> exclaim excitedly
(ne) 01hh 131: Now decide... [NJM: dashes.]
(ne) 01hh 133: 'Where are you from?'... [NJM: dashes.]
(ne) 01hh 138: A few minutes later... [NJM: dashes.]
(ft) 01hh 141 [NJM: I think a footnote should be added, either here or in
Section 163, allowing retrieval of the knife after combat.]
(ne) 01hh 155: The place looks familiar... [NJM: dashes.]
(ne) 01hh 155: If your total is... [NJM: dash.]
(ne) 01hh 158: You take the C.B. Radio... [NJM: dashes.]
(ne) 01hh 160: It leads to the ruins... [NJM: dash.]
(er) 01hh 162: air force sergeant -> Air Force sergeant [NJM: also
caption, facing page]
(ne) 01hh 163: Come see me.. [NJM: dash.]
(ft) 01hh 163: You may take only one of the three weapons listed above.
[NJM: But can I have all the ammo?)
(er) 01hh 163: the Motel's lobby-> the motel's lobby
(er) 01hh 163: seconds later, you-> seconds later you
(ne) 01hh 165: If the number you have picked is.. [NJM: dashes (three
instances)
(er) 01hh 166: two bikers, and-> two bikers and
(ne) 01hh 166: If your total is.. [NJM: dash (twice)]
(ne) 01hh 167: If your total is now 9-14.. [NJM: dash]
(er) 01hh 171: de-activates-> deactivates
(ne) 01hh 173: If your total is now 0-4.. [NJM: dash]
(er) 01hh 175: anti-biotics-> antibiotics
(er) 01hh 175: saddle-bag-> saddlebag
(ne) 01hh 176: Only one barrel.. [NJM: dashes]
(er) 01hh 177: gulley-> gully
(ne) 01hh 177: If the total is now 0-9.. [NJM: dash]
(ne) 01hh 178: If your total is now 8-13.. [NJM: dash]
(er) 01hh 183: Six-pac-> Six-Pac
(er) 01hh 199: toy store-> toystore [NJM: not sure about this one]
Cheers,
Neil McGrory
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