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From: SJ karota1334@xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 23:57:50 on Thursday, May 6, 2021
Subject: Grey Star The Wizard - The Story So Far
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"He has made pacts with demons and has captured the spirits of the dead who do
his bidding as undead slaves. > He has made pacts with demons and has captured
the spirits of the dead, who do his bidding as undead slaves."
subtle distinction, but without the comma it reads like he captured some
spirits who already happened to be doing his bidding as undead slaves
"Your training is incomplete but you must begin without delay. > Your training
is incomplete, but you must begin without delay."
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