I tried to post these through the EC (local) a shorty while ago, but as they haven't shown up yet and I am mildly paranoid, here they are too...:
(ne) 17tdoi title: Don't forget to update the date :-) (??) 17tdoi tssf: There is a slight Magnamund history problem in this book. First, unlike what this section says, it was during the Age of War that the Elder Magi defeated Agarash and the Age of the Old Kingdoms came afterwards, according to the MC. Second, throughout the book the old native Ixians are described as an Old Kingdoms race... which they then clearly weren't, as they lived a few thousand years before that era. (??) 17tdoi imprvdsc: There is a weird bracketed dot in the description of Splinter. (ft) 17tdoi 64: More comparable to similar footnotes we have written would be "The wording of this section ignores the fact that you may arrive here without passing through the curtain of light." (??) 17tdoi 161: You cannot have higher rank than Sun Thane, so the wording in choice one is superfluous. (ft) 17tdoi 179: Since all other places where you are asked for a Meal has you being able to use Grand Huntmastery, can't one just assume that the absence of that option here was intentional? (Even though there is no particular logic to it...) (??) 17tdoi 196: You cannot have higher rank than Sun Thane, so the wording in choice one is superfluous. (??) 17tdoi 253: You cannot have higher rank than Sun Thane, so the wording in choice one is superfluous. (??) 17tdoi 332: You cannot have higher rank than Sun Thane, so the wording in choice one is superfluous. (ft) 17tdoi 264: So is this badboy immune to Kai-blast too? (Footnote?) (ne) 17tdoi 264: The illustration should be moved down a bit
Note that I still haven't played throught the whole book... and I wonder if it's really possible to survive it for a character created for book 13 (let alone this book!).
-- Thomas