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From: SJ karota1334@xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 15:43:47 on Monday, May 24, 2021
Subject: The Forbidden City - The Story So Far
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You were taken to the dungeons of the House of Correction, the Shadakine prison
of Suhn and subjected to the truthsay of Mother Magri, Shadakine Wytch and
Law-giver. > You were taken to the dungeons of the House of Correction, the
Shadakine prison of Suhn, and subjected to the truthsay of Mother Magri,
Shadakine Wytch and Law-giver.
Neither your Magical Powers, nor the might of your Wizardâs Staff seemed able
to defeat the Kleasá and it had almost destroyed you when Tanith cast a spell
and called the demon against her. > Neither your Magical Powers, nor the might
of your Wizardâs Staff seemed able to defeat the Kleasá, and it had almost
destroyed you when Tanith cast a spell and called the demon against her.
Here, Shan fell, poisoned and consumed by a Quoku, the flying amphibian
indigenous to those parts. > There, Shan fell, poisoned and consumed by a
Quoku, the flying amphibian indigenous to those parts.
(Am I wrong to think that "Here" and "those parts" are working in opposition?
It could alternately be changed to "Here...to these parts" for agreement, but
that seems awkward in comparison.)
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