[projectaon] Re: spelling edit request.
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: sheepleorders@xxxxxxxxxxxxx, projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Thu, 27 Dec 2012 13:10:42 +0000
On 27/12/2012 00:55, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
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From: LoneWolfbite
Date: 00:55:47 on Thursday, December 27, 2012
Subject: spelling edit request.
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Hello please consider editing the following.
The words in all Capital letters are the ones I am talking about.
shadow on the sand --
178 -should be - "if you WIN" the combat.
Castle death --
77 - should be - "THAT can sustain its existence"
95 - should be - "the warrior BEGINS to shake"
the masters of darkness --
88 - should be - "it possesses a power THAT can seal his doom."
Thank you.
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Hi
Thanks for taking the time to report the problems you spotted. I've
looked at these four, but I can't see any problem with two of them.
Book 5 Section 178--should be - "if you WIN" the combat :
<http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/05sots/sect178.htm>
and
Book 7 Section 77--should be - "THAT can sustain its existence" :
<http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/07cd/sect77.htm>
These both seem to be fine in the latest releases, so you might be using
older editions. All the books in the Lone Wolf and Grey Star series were
re-released earlier this year.
On the other hand the other two you reported do need to be changed.
Book 7 Section 95--should be - "the warrior BEGINS to shake" :
<http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/07cd/sect95.htm>
Currently says "beings to shake"!
Book 12 Section 88--should be - "it possesses a power THAT can seal his
doom." : <http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/12tmod/sect88.htm>
Currently says "possesses a power than can seal his doom"!
These two errors have been fixed in the source files and will be fixed
online the next time we re-release the books.
Thanks again for reporting these. We appreciate all the help that fellow
Lone Wolf fans have provided and we always want to make our releases
better. So if you spot any other problems, please report them to us.
For Sommerlund and the Kai!
--
Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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