[etni] Re: Fwd: On Teaching Literature

  • From: Hdar Yashar <hdarh5@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: David Lloyd <etni.list@xxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Wed, 22 Jan 2014 20:18:59 +0200

With all due respect, this is a bit of a ramble, and for that reason, I
will only give a general answer...
I do not agree with most of what was said here. And I'm only coming forth
and saying this on the off-chance that someone from the Ministry happens
across this email. I wouldn't want them to think that this email is
representative of what all the English teachers out there.

I LOVE teaching HOTS.  And I'm not going to go into a ramble of each and
every aspect of it and why/how I love it.  Clearly after 40 years of
teaching, Stephen has his own style/method of teaching literature that
works for him.  But that hardly means that the Ministry implemented method
isn't worth a darn.  It's just different than what he's being doing for
perhaps too long.

Just my humble opinion,
-Hdar.  :o)


On Wed, Jan 22, 2014 at 4:02 PM, ETNI list <etni.list@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

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> From: סטיב <skbyk@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
> Subject: On Teaching Literature
>
> Kudos to Renee Wahl and to all the other teachers, who, over the
> years, have written about the almost innumerable faults of the present
> literature program. However, even if the ‘What HOTS/LOTS/MOTS did
> youuuuuuuuu use?’ questions are dropped into the deep pit where they
> belong, there would still remain an enormous gap between what a
> literature program for EFL students should be and what the Ministry
> has created.
>
> The Ministry’s present approach to literature is to use the works as a
> variety-pack of advanced reading ‘comprehension’ passages accompanied
> by the often obfuscating HOTS exercises in misdirected pedagogy.  At
> best, this is a real waste of the literary material – there are so
> many wonderfully badly-written and nearly totally incomprehensible
> academic articles that students could practice on (and should, since
> they may well be facing them in university) – and at worst, the
> process could ‘turn off’ even Native-speakers from ever wanting to
> read literature again. Not to mention the fact that, in addition to
> teacher and student work overload, the program, as currently
> conceived, isn’t really succeeding in its presumably avowed goal of
> improving writing skills. Having students write seven or eight pieces
> while only carefully checking and correcting two really doesn’t do
> much except offer an additional six possibilities for the students to
> continue the making their same mistakes and further entrenching bad
> habits. Better short assignments given to small sections of the
> classes at staggered intervals than making the students write, all at
> the same time, relatively long essays which are often so filled with
> mistakes that the corrective tasks become daunting, if not impossible.
>  (I won’t even bother to speak about the issues connected to internet
> usage.)
>
> However, instead of merely caviling, I would like, instead, to offer a
> genuine rationale for studying literature:
>
> I don’t think it can be disputed that the true purpose of studying
> literature is to learn to appreciate it; and not, as the Ministry
> seems to think, to merely ‘understand’ it as a vehicle for teaching
> analytical techniques and concepts that should have been taught, in
> Hebrew, in the fourth, fifth and sixth grades.
>
> To ‘appreciate’: the which (to use an old-fashioned construct) means
> examining a work, not just for its story line or ‘correct’ moral
> implications or – Heaven help us – its ‘suitability’ for a particular
> political program, but for how it is ‘put together’ as the artist’s
> exercise in linguistic proficiency and mastery. After all, when we
> examine great literature – and why, by the way, should we be offering
> our students anything but the very best? – what truly thrills us and
> helps us understand the meaning of  literary greatness and genius is
> the discovery and exploration of how the writer – regardless of genre
> – uses and manipulates the language: not only to tell a story or
> express ideas, but to create images, elicit and involve our
> imaginations and evoke and control our emotions and reactions. In
> short, it is the process of teaching the appreciation of literature
> that focuses on and improves the students’ linguistic skills; even as
> it demonstrates the mastery, artistry and yes, the playfulness to be
> found – forgive the hyperbole – in that ‘wondrous thing that is
> language.’
>
> You want to teach literature? Then really examine it:  What kind and
> level of language is the writer working in? Do the sentences have a
> rhythm even as prose? Are they imagistic and metaphoric or are they
> lacking in color? Are they structurally and syntactically
> straight-forward and clear, or are they complex and puzzling? Does,
> and if so, how does the author’s use of language help us infer a
> different level of content? Does the level of language and vocabulary
> effect the presentation and development of the characters? Is our
> interest piqued from the outset? Are we surprised, intrigued,
> attracted, repelled, amused, moved, involved?  Could we say the same
> thing differently (how? give an example) and would it be a gain or a
> loss…and why?
>
> How does the opening paragraph, or the first stanza, or the first
> dialogue exchange prepare us for what comes next? What about the next
> paragraph/stanza/scene? Are there similarities to the first lines?  If
> so, and we see that the writer consistently writes this way, could we
> call this the writer’s ‘style’? (Patterns anyone? Comparisons and
> contrasts anyone?)
>
> Why do we laugh? Is it at the situation described, or at the words
> used to describe it? Does the writer use language ironically? Does the
> author reveal his/her attitude to the characters?  Are we meant to
> laugh with or at the characters? Do we like them? Do they arouse our
> sympathy, compassion, contempt, etc.?
>
> Why is poetry considered by many to be the highest form of literature?
> What makes a piece of writing poetry? What are the differences between
> poetry and song…between poetry and prose? Where is the music in
> poetry? What does rhyme do for us?  Let’s see how easy or hard it is
> to write a coherent description or thought in rhymed couplets, or in
> an fixed pattern of a,b,a,b. (We could even try alliteration.) Let’s
> really apply our understanding of parts of speech and replace the
> nonsense words in “The Jabberwocky ”. How many different levels of
> meanings has the poet implied by his choice of words? How do the
> changes in standard sentence structure and syntax affect our
> understanding? etc., etc., etc., etc…
>
> I have not attempted to organize or order the above questions
> coherently, but it should be obvious that these are some of the kinds
> of questions and explorations that raise and expand a student’s level
> and mastery of the language; even as the search for answers can
> inspire appreciation and even awe. This is teaching language and
> language skills in context. This is what demands and trains
> recognition of patterns. This is what can provide recognition of the
> multiplicity of the different meanings of a word…and so on, and so
> forth.
>
> As to the matriculation exams, I contend that any student who learns
> to ask and answer even a portion of such questions will have no
> problem passing even the old-fashioned, one- exam-fits-all.
>
> True, not all students reach a level that can genuinely manage this,
> but that’s even truer under the present system; which is trying to
> shove often overly-long works of rather mediocre literature down the
> students’ throats as if force-feeding geese; and aside from the fact
> that such forced-feeding has been rightfully deemed cruel and unusual
> punishment, it’s defeating its own purpose:  because most of the works
> are simply too long or boring to sustain student interest.. This is
> particularly true for this generation of students; whose attention
> spans require, at least initially, much shorter ‘bytes’.  And it’s not
> as if there aren’t great alternatives. If you really want to engage
> students in the issues of choice, instead of “Two roads diverged…”
> teach the same poet’s “Fire and Ice”.  It’s much more comprehendible,
> encompassable and accessible to the students; and offers a far wider
> and more interesting set of possible studies and comparisons than the
> present incumbent.  And do get rid of those ridiculous biographical
> ‘bridging’ questions.  A work of art should stand on its own and the
> only time authorial biographical information has any
> analytical/critical validity is when it is needed to clarify otherwise
> unclear portions of the work; and if such clarification is necessary,
> then the work is clearly flawed and we shouldn’t be teaching it in the
> first place.
>
> However, I am not entirely negative in regard of the literature
> program. I greatly support the HOTS program as an excellent method for
> teaching the basic approaches to literature to teachers who have no
> experience in the subject. However, the program really belongs in
> teaching seminaries and teacher improvement courses, not in EFL
> classrooms. The ‘Post-reading Activities’ carry more than a whiff of
> artificiality and misguided attempts to ‘legislate’ student attitudes
> through rather elementary school-like ‘What I did in the Holidays’
> assignments; and the ‘Reflections,’ and ‘Summative Assessments’ are
> even more odiferous as circuitous but not very covert attempts to
> provide the Ministry with some kind of ‘feel-good’ self-justification
> for the HOTS program.  If at all explored, the ‘reflections’ should be
> limited to the students’ opinions of the work’s application to human
> experiences as they understand them; and the self-congratulatory
> ‘Summative’ assessments should be eliminated entirely.
>
> Finally, returning to the issue of the kinds of works we should be
> teaching, the key is certainly shortness and compactness, at least
> initially; and I’m not sure that I wouldn’t start formally teaching
> literature in the 9th grade by introducing different genres of short
> poems: perhaps starting with some nursery rhymes , which will provide
> them with a genuine connection to Anglo-Saxon culture and whose
> historical references will certainly intrigue them  – and then moving
> on to Haikus that they can all write themselves (there are several
> very nice ‘write your own haiku’ programs on the internet).  We might
> even let them discover that poetry can be fun and non-threatening:
> through Ogden Nash limericks and Lewis Carroll; and even Roald Dahl’s
> spoofs on Little Red Riding Hood and the Three Little Pigs; and, once
> having eliminated (or at least mitigated) their often negative
> attitudes to poetry, one could move on in the 10th grade to Whitman
> (Oh Captain, my captain…), Frost (Fire and Ice), E. A. Robinson
> (Richard Cory) and even e.e.cummings (Spring is like a perhaps hand)
> and even one or two of the Sonnets (just to name a few of my own
> preferences).
>
> My experience has shown that once they can read, comprehend and
> appreciate poetry, confronting literary prose is a ‘cinch’.  But then,
> I’ve only been teaching literature for 40 years; and unlike the
> Ministry, what do I know?
>
> Stephen Byk
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