With all due respect, this is a bit of a ramble, and for that reason, I will only give a general answer... I do not agree with most of what was said here. And I'm only coming forth and saying this on the off-chance that someone from the Ministry happens across this email. I wouldn't want them to think that this email is representative of what all the English teachers out there. I LOVE teaching HOTS. And I'm not going to go into a ramble of each and every aspect of it and why/how I love it. Clearly after 40 years of teaching, Stephen has his own style/method of teaching literature that works for him. But that hardly means that the Ministry implemented method isn't worth a darn. It's just different than what he's being doing for perhaps too long. Just my humble opinion, -Hdar. :o) On Wed, Jan 22, 2014 at 4:02 PM, ETNI list <etni.list@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > ---------- Forwarded message ---------- > From: ס××× <skbyk@xxxxxxxxxxxx> > Subject: On Teaching Literature > > Kudos to Renee Wahl and to all the other teachers, who, over the > years, have written about the almost innumerable faults of the present > literature program. However, even if the âWhat HOTS/LOTS/MOTS did > youuuuuuuuu use?â questions are dropped into the deep pit where they > belong, there would still remain an enormous gap between what a > literature program for EFL students should be and what the Ministry > has created. > > The Ministryâs present approach to literature is to use the works as a > variety-pack of advanced reading âcomprehensionâ passages accompanied > by the often obfuscating HOTS exercises in misdirected pedagogy. At > best, this is a real waste of the literary material â there are so > many wonderfully badly-written and nearly totally incomprehensible > academic articles that students could practice on (and should, since > they may well be facing them in university) â and at worst, the > process could âturn offâ even Native-speakers from ever wanting to > read literature again. Not to mention the fact that, in addition to > teacher and student work overload, the program, as currently > conceived, isnât really succeeding in its presumably avowed goal of > improving writing skills. Having students write seven or eight pieces > while only carefully checking and correcting two really doesnât do > much except offer an additional six possibilities for the students to > continue the making their same mistakes and further entrenching bad > habits. Better short assignments given to small sections of the > classes at staggered intervals than making the students write, all at > the same time, relatively long essays which are often so filled with > mistakes that the corrective tasks become daunting, if not impossible. > (I wonât even bother to speak about the issues connected to internet > usage.) > > However, instead of merely caviling, I would like, instead, to offer a > genuine rationale for studying literature: > > I donât think it can be disputed that the true purpose of studying > literature is to learn to appreciate it; and not, as the Ministry > seems to think, to merely âunderstandâ it as a vehicle for teaching > analytical techniques and concepts that should have been taught, in > Hebrew, in the fourth, fifth and sixth grades. > > To âappreciateâ: the which (to use an old-fashioned construct) means > examining a work, not just for its story line or âcorrectâ moral > implications or â Heaven help us â its âsuitabilityâ for a particular > political program, but for how it is âput togetherâ as the artistâs > exercise in linguistic proficiency and mastery. After all, when we > examine great literature â and why, by the way, should we be offering > our students anything but the very best? â what truly thrills us and > helps us understand the meaning of literary greatness and genius is > the discovery and exploration of how the writer â regardless of genre > â uses and manipulates the language: not only to tell a story or > express ideas, but to create images, elicit and involve our > imaginations and evoke and control our emotions and reactions. In > short, it is the process of teaching the appreciation of literature > that focuses on and improves the studentsâ linguistic skills; even as > it demonstrates the mastery, artistry and yes, the playfulness to be > found â forgive the hyperbole â in that âwondrous thing that is > language.â > > You want to teach literature? Then really examine it: What kind and > level of language is the writer working in? Do the sentences have a > rhythm even as prose? Are they imagistic and metaphoric or are they > lacking in color? Are they structurally and syntactically > straight-forward and clear, or are they complex and puzzling? Does, > and if so, how does the authorâs use of language help us infer a > different level of content? Does the level of language and vocabulary > effect the presentation and development of the characters? Is our > interest piqued from the outset? Are we surprised, intrigued, > attracted, repelled, amused, moved, involved? Could we say the same > thing differently (how? give an example) and would it be a gain or a > lossâ¦and why? > > How does the opening paragraph, or the first stanza, or the first > dialogue exchange prepare us for what comes next? What about the next > paragraph/stanza/scene? Are there similarities to the first lines? If > so, and we see that the writer consistently writes this way, could we > call this the writerâs âstyleâ? (Patterns anyone? Comparisons and > contrasts anyone?) > > Why do we laugh? Is it at the situation described, or at the words > used to describe it? Does the writer use language ironically? Does the > author reveal his/her attitude to the characters? Are we meant to > laugh with or at the characters? Do we like them? Do they arouse our > sympathy, compassion, contempt, etc.? > > Why is poetry considered by many to be the highest form of literature? > What makes a piece of writing poetry? What are the differences between > poetry and songâ¦between poetry and prose? Where is the music in > poetry? What does rhyme do for us? Letâs see how easy or hard it is > to write a coherent description or thought in rhymed couplets, or in > an fixed pattern of a,b,a,b. (We could even try alliteration.) Letâs > really apply our understanding of parts of speech and replace the > nonsense words in âThe Jabberwocky â. How many different levels of > meanings has the poet implied by his choice of words? How do the > changes in standard sentence structure and syntax affect our > understanding? etc., etc., etc., etc⦠> > I have not attempted to organize or order the above questions > coherently, but it should be obvious that these are some of the kinds > of questions and explorations that raise and expand a studentâs level > and mastery of the language; even as the search for answers can > inspire appreciation and even awe. This is teaching language and > language skills in context. This is what demands and trains > recognition of patterns. This is what can provide recognition of the > multiplicity of the different meanings of a wordâ¦and so on, and so > forth. > > As to the matriculation exams, I contend that any student who learns > to ask and answer even a portion of such questions will have no > problem passing even the old-fashioned, one- exam-fits-all. > > True, not all students reach a level that can genuinely manage this, > but thatâs even truer under the present system; which is trying to > shove often overly-long works of rather mediocre literature down the > studentsâ throats as if force-feeding geese; and aside from the fact > that such forced-feeding has been rightfully deemed cruel and unusual > punishment, itâs defeating its own purpose: because most of the works > are simply too long or boring to sustain student interest.. This is > particularly true for this generation of students; whose attention > spans require, at least initially, much shorter âbytesâ. And itâs not > as if there arenât great alternatives. If you really want to engage > students in the issues of choice, instead of âTwo roads divergedâ¦â > teach the same poetâs âFire and Iceâ. Itâs much more comprehendible, > encompassable and accessible to the students; and offers a far wider > and more interesting set of possible studies and comparisons than the > present incumbent. And do get rid of those ridiculous biographical > âbridgingâ questions. A work of art should stand on its own and the > only time authorial biographical information has any > analytical/critical validity is when it is needed to clarify otherwise > unclear portions of the work; and if such clarification is necessary, > then the work is clearly flawed and we shouldnât be teaching it in the > first place. > > However, I am not entirely negative in regard of the literature > program. I greatly support the HOTS program as an excellent method for > teaching the basic approaches to literature to teachers who have no > experience in the subject. However, the program really belongs in > teaching seminaries and teacher improvement courses, not in EFL > classrooms. The âPost-reading Activitiesâ carry more than a whiff of > artificiality and misguided attempts to âlegislateâ student attitudes > through rather elementary school-like âWhat I did in the Holidaysâ > assignments; and the âReflections,â and âSummative Assessmentsâ are > even more odiferous as circuitous but not very covert attempts to > provide the Ministry with some kind of âfeel-goodâ self-justification > for the HOTS program. If at all explored, the âreflectionsâ should be > limited to the studentsâ opinions of the workâs application to human > experiences as they understand them; and the self-congratulatory > âSummativeâ assessments should be eliminated entirely. > > Finally, returning to the issue of the kinds of works we should be > teaching, the key is certainly shortness and compactness, at least > initially; and Iâm not sure that I wouldnât start formally teaching > literature in the 9th grade by introducing different genres of short > poems: perhaps starting with some nursery rhymes , which will provide > them with a genuine connection to Anglo-Saxon culture and whose > historical references will certainly intrigue them â and then moving > on to Haikus that they can all write themselves (there are several > very nice âwrite your own haikuâ programs on the internet). We might > even let them discover that poetry can be fun and non-threatening: > through Ogden Nash limericks and Lewis Carroll; and even Roald Dahlâs > spoofs on Little Red Riding Hood and the Three Little Pigs; and, once > having eliminated (or at least mitigated) their often negative > attitudes to poetry, one could move on in the 10th grade to Whitman > (Oh Captain, my captainâ¦), Frost (Fire and Ice), E. A. Robinson > (Richard Cory) and even e.e.cummings (Spring is like a perhaps hand) > and even one or two of the Sonnets (just to name a few of my own > preferences). > > My experience has shown that once they can read, comprehend and > appreciate poetry, confronting literary prose is a âcinchâ. But then, > Iâve only been teaching literature for 40 years; and unlike the > Ministry, what do I know? > > Stephen Byk > ************************************** > ** Join ETNI on Facebook > https://www.facebook.com/groups/31737970668/ > ** ETNI Blog and Poll > http://ask-etni.blogspot.co.il/ > ** Etni homepage - http://www.etni.org > ** post to ETNI List - etni@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > ** help - ask@xxxxxxxx > *************************************** > > ************************************** ** Join ETNI on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/groups/31737970668/ ** ETNI Blog and Poll http://ask-etni.blogspot.co.il/ ** Etni homepage - http://www.etni.org ** post to ETNI List - etni@xxxxxxxxxxxxx ** help - ask@xxxxxxxx ***************************************