[projectaon] 19wb Comment Period (Part 1)
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 22 Jan 2009 14:42:22 +0000
Hi
I've read through the rules section only of Wolf's Bane and I spotted the
following issues:
Escalated:
(er) Grand Master Disciplines: limited immunity to flames, toxic gases, corrosive liquids. ->
limited immunity to flames, toxic gases, and corrosive liquids.
(er) Grand Master Disciplines [x2]: battle wounds -> battle-wounds (See also, 07cd:186; 11tpot:74;
GM13-18, 20:GMD [x2]; 21votm:104, GMD; NO22-25, 27, 28:GMD; 26tfobm:190, GMD)
(ne) Equipment: The illustrations of the Broadsword, Bow, Sword, and Axe are missing from the
williams/ illustrations folder. They all appear in the original book.
(ne) Random Number Table: Need new RNT generated for this book. [so: Would it be possible to
generate all the remaining RNTs at once? That might be a bit more efficient.]
(ne) Action Chart: Need new acdscplz.png with 10th Discipline
Fixed in xml:
(ne) The Story So Far: Remove superfluous space after <ch.emdash/>
(er) The Story So Far: para.3 uses both "Darkland armies" and "Darklands armies". The latter is
unprecedented in the books and was changed.
(ne) The Story So Far: Your discovery, [so: Remove superfluous comma]
(ne) The Story So Far: Grand Master disciplines -> Grand Master Disciplines
(ne) The Story So Far: Old Kingdom Magic -> Old Kingdom magic
(ne) The Story So Far: and,by -> and, by
(ne) Grand Master Disciplines: Use PNG not GIF image.
(ne) Grand Master Disciplines: weapons.png missing
(ne) Equipment: quiver, dagger, food, rope, potion images missing.
(er) Improved Grand Master Disciplines: Kai Grand Crowns with this discipline -> Kai Grand Crowns
with this Discipline
Also Spotted & Fixed:
Book 2:
(ne) 108: saw <ch.emdash/> -> saw<ch.emdash/>
Book 3:
(ne) Rules For Combat: below,at -> below, at
Book 9:
(ne) 246: senses,but -> senses, but
Book 15:
(er) The Story So Far [x3]: Magic -> magic
Book 17:
(ne) Grand Master Disciplines: Use PNG not GIF images.
Book 18:
(ne) Grand Master Disciplines: Use PNG not GIF images.
Book 20:
(ne) Grand Master Disciplines: Use PNG not GIF images.
Phew! On to Section 1 and beyond later.
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Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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