[projectaon] 19wb Comment Period (Part 2)
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 22 Jan 2009 22:49:58 +0000
Hi
Help! I can't seem to get <ch.minus/> to work at all--I just get a blank space! This breaks Section
304 (not to mention the Combat Rules sections for Books 1-12).
Escalated:
(er) 29: for sight of -> for a sight of [or, for a view/glimpse of?]
(er) 34, 183: battle armour -> battle-armour
(er) 49: concentrations of evil -> concentrations of Evil [cf. Good in 104, 216, 350; Evil in 215,
285, 297]
(er) 62: spell of levitation -> spell of <spell>Levitation</spell> (or,
<spell>Levitation</spell> spell)
(er) 90: Dagger (if -> Dagger. (If *and* Chart). -> Chart.)
(er) 100: tall open -> tall, open
(er) 170: ultimate evil -> ultimate Evil (cf. 215, 285, 297)
(er) 199: whir -> whirr (cf. 04cc: 28, 09tcof:326; 12tmod:110)
(er) 199: strikes terror in -> strikes terror into
(er) 229, 281: cold dark universe -> cold, dark universe
(er) 227: black glassy mineral -> black, glassy mineral
(er) 230: careering -> careening [so: maybe? cf. PAMoS]
(er) 246, 285: 246: clay tile roof vs. 215, 285, 297: The clay-tiled hovel
(er) 249: Clasp (if -> Clasp. (If *and* tunic). -> tunic.)
(er) 251: reveals that by tapping upon each square a correct number of times you will -> reveals
that tapping upon each square a correct number of times will
(er) 276: must reduce your COMBAT SKILL by four -> must reduce your COMBAT
SKILL by 4 [rules mechanic]
(er) 300: ultimate evil -> ultimate Evil [cf. Evil in 215, 285, 297]
(er) 304: combat ratio -> Combat Ratio
(er) 344: aura of evil -> aura of Evil [cf. Evil in 215, 285, 297]
Fixed:
(ne) 1: use repel it -> use your psychic Kai defences to repel it
(ne) 34: that, glimmers -> that glimmers
(ne) 80: hurling -> hurtling
(ne) 96: effective although -> effective, although
(ne) 112: booms.//'Now -> booms. 'Now
(ne) 130: back, It -> back. It
(er) 261: clack <onomatopoeia> as per 134
Phew! A few more than I'd anticipated, but still pretty clean, nonetheless. Anyone else up for
checking Book 19?
--
Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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