[projectaon] Re: 19wb Comment Period (Part 2)
- From: Jonathan Blake <blake.jon@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 23 Jan 2009 13:13:36 -0800
On Thu, Jan 22, 2009 at 2:49 PM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Escalated:
> (er) 29: for sight of -> for a sight of [or, for a view/glimpse of?]
> (er) 34, 183: battle armour -> battle-armour
> (er) 49: concentrations of evil -> concentrations of Evil [cf. Good in 104,
> 216, 350; Evil in 215, 285, 297]
> (er) 62: spell of levitation -> spell of <spell>Levitation</spell> (or,
> <spell>Levitation</spell> spell)
> (er) 90: Dagger (if -> Dagger. (If *and* Chart). -> Chart.)
> (er) 100: tall open -> tall, open
> (er) 170: ultimate evil -> ultimate Evil (cf. 215, 285, 297)
> (er) 199: whir -> whirr (cf. 04cc: 28, 09tcof:326; 12tmod:110)
fix
> (er) 199: strikes terror in -> strikes terror into
This seems fine to my ears.
> (er) 229, 281: cold dark universe -> cold, dark universe
> (er) 227: black glassy mineral -> black, glassy mineral
fix
> (er) 230: careering -> careening [so: maybe? cf. PAMoS]
There's not enough information to tell if this is incorrect. Leave as-is.
> (er) 246, 285: 246: clay tile roof vs. 215, 285, 297: The clay-tiled hovel
clay-tile
> (er) 249: Clasp (if -> Clasp. (If *and* tunic). -> tunic.)
> (er) 251: reveals that by tapping upon each square a correct number of times
> you will -> reveals that tapping upon each square a correct number of times
> will
> (er) 276: must reduce your COMBAT SKILL by four -> must reduce your COMBAT
> SKILL by 4 [rules mechanic]
> (er) 300: ultimate evil -> ultimate Evil [cf. Evil in 215, 285, 297]
> (er) 304: combat ratio -> Combat Ratio
> (er) 344: aura of evil -> aura of Evil [cf. Evil in 215, 285, 297]
fix
> Phew! A few more than I'd anticipated, but still pretty clean, nonetheless.
> Anyone else up for checking Book 19?
Have we recruited on the forum for this? I may blog about it and offer
it as a sneak peek.
--
Jon
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