[projectaon] Another small mistake in 'The Cauldron of Fear'
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Date: 01:37:35 on Sunday, May 10, 2009
Subject: Another small mistake in 'The Cauldron of Fear'
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In numbered section 121 of 'The Cauldron of Fear', the passage ends thus. 'All
they see is a blur of green as you duck under their crossed halberds and
disappear into the teeming.'
'Teeming' is a description which doesn't hold in synchronisation with the rest
of the sentence unless it's followed by an object e.g. 'crowd', a sentence
can't end that way. So obviously the sentence is unfinished, I would think that
the author may have meant to finish the sentence with 'mass', or something like
that I'd figure.
For Sommerlund and the Kai!
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