[projectaon] Re: Another small mistake in 'The Cauldron of Fear'
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
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- Date: Sun, 10 May 2009 09:37:05 +0100
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From: Sergio
Date: 01:37:35 on Sunday, May 10, 2009
Subject: Another small mistake in 'The Cauldron of Fear'
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In numbered section 121 of 'The Cauldron of Fear', the passage ends thus. 'All
they see is a blur of green as you duck under their crossed halberds and
disappear into the teeming.'
'Teeming' is a description which doesn't hold in synchronisation with the rest
of the sentence unless it's followed by an object e.g. 'crowd', a sentence
can't end that way. So obviously the sentence is unfinished, I would think that
the author may have meant to finish the sentence with 'mass', or something like
that I'd figure.
For Sommerlund and the Kai!
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Hi again Sergio
This annoying problem does not appear in the original text of the book, so it is something we
managed to introduce ourselves. :-(
Checking the book, the word missing at the end of the sentence is "throng". We have fixed our source
files and the fix will be in the online edition when we re-release Book 9.
Once again, thanks for reporting these issues to us. We want our editions to be of the highest
quality, and reports like these help us towards that goal.
For Sommerlund and the Kai!
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Simon Osborne
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