[projectaon] Freeway Warrior 3 - The Omega Zone XML
- From: Iain Smith <iainsmith@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Mon, 5 Dec 2005 05:22:33 -0800 (PST)
Changes have been made and committed into CVS. List is attached.
Other questions/notes:
sect36: I don't like the term "shot-shell", would "shotgun shell" be better?
sect39: "Within a minute he has made a hole large enough to of the truck".
This text
doesn't make sense, especially when read in conjunction with the source section
(277).
I'm not sure exactly what JD intended this to say and I can't think of a simple
fix which
would correct it. I'm guessing that some text was omitted from the reference
in my copy
of the book and hoping that it was fixed in other editions that other may have
access to.
"syphon" vs "siphon", another of the series-wide discussions is needed.
sect276: "one a.m." looks a little silly, reformat??
sect295: The text about dropping items here is in signpost format in this
section, but
not in any of the other 4 occurrences, was is intended that all similar text be
made to
follow this format?
Regards,
Iain.
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http://www.yahoo.com/r/hsChanges from v1.1 to v1.2:
o Title Page - Added
o Dedication - Formatted
o Acknowledgements - Added (Needs updating with correct contributors, etc)
o Dateline To Disaster - Formatted
o The Story So Far - Formatted
- Replaced "re-establish" with "reestablish" (errata)
o Game Rules - Formatted
- Replaced "pick a O" with "pick a 0" (errata)
o Survival Skills - Formatted (not keen on the original formatting, but kept it
for now)
o Equipment - Formatted
- Replaced "map of Western Texas" with "Map of Western Texas" and added link
- Added item class for items in list
o Weapons - Formatted
- Changed weapon types to bold text
o Combat Rules - Formatted
- Replaced "cross-refer" with "cross-reference" (errata)
- Replaced "+1 If" with "+1. If" (errata)
Left out general text changes (list would be too long)
Replaced CCS bonuses [] with () in sections: 11, 63, 82, 150, 152, 192, 310, 320
sect7: Added illustration
sect8: "head over heals" -> "head over heels" (errata)
sect11: Added item class to "Binoculars", "Compass", "Signal Flare"
sect11: "antispetics" ->"antiseptics" (errata)
sect26: Added item class to "Rope", "Tow Chain"
sect35: Added illustration
sect44: Added illustration
sect54: Added illustration
sect54: Added item class to "HE Grenade", "Tenon Saw"
sect55: "Tennon Saw" -> "Tenon Saw" (errata)
sect55: Added item class to "HE Grenade", "Tenon Saw"
sect59: Added item class to "Whistle"
sect63: Corrected brackets around ammo text
sect63: Added item class to "Whistle"
sect66: Added item class to "Electrolyte", "Wire Cutters", "Screwdriver"
sect66: Corrected "Action Chart" text and formatted accordingly
sect80: Added item class to "Binoculars"
sect82: Added item class to "HE Grenade"
sect88: Added illustration
sect90: Added item class to "Engine Oil"
sect92: Added item class to "Plastic Tube"
sect98: "is is" -> "it is" (errata)
sect100: Added item class to "Contact Mine"
sect104: "reassurringly" -> "reassuringly" (errata)
sect105: Added illustration
sect108: Added item class to "Plastic Tube"
sect120: Added illustration
sect125: Corrected "ENDURANCE" text and formatted accordingly
sect136: "turn 235" -> "turn to 235" (errata)
sect136: corrected link formatting
sect143: Added illustration
sect145: Added item class to "Whistle"
sect150: Added item class to "Combat Viewer", "HE Grenade", "Tear Gas Grenade",
"CB Radio", "Compass", "Map"
sect152: Added item class to "Solar Torch", "Fishing Tackle", "Tool Kit",
"Rope", "Blanket"
sect153: corrected link formatting
sect164: Added illustration
sect165: Added item class to "Screwdriver", "Solar Torch"
sect167: "straigthening" -> "straightening" (errata)
sect171: Added illustration
sect171: "expodes" -> "explodes" (errata)
sect171: "turn 304" -> "turn to 304" (errata)
sect171: corrected link formatting
sect174: Added item class to "Blanket", "Solar Torch", "File", "Tool Kit", "Air
Pump", "Rope"
sect174: "Tool kit" -> "Tool Kit" (errata - consistency)
sect176: Added illustration
sect181: Corrected "ENDURANCE" text and formatted accordingly
sect192: Added item class to "Binoculars", "Compass", "Signal Flare"
sect200: Added illustration
sect218: Added illustration
sect218: Added item class to "Solar Regulator"
sect220: "landcruiser" -> "Landcruiser" (errata - consistency)
sect223: "you Action Chart" -> "your Action Chart" (errata)
sect226: "motorcyle" -> "motorcycle" (errata)
sect227: Added illustration
sect229: Added item class to "CB Radio"
sect241: "binouclars" -> "binoculars" (errata)
sect243: Added item class to "Solar Regulator"
sect247: Added item class to "Fire Extinguisher"
sect252: Added illustration
sect261: Added item class to "HE Grenade", "Signal Flare"
sect264: "encumberance" -> "encumbrance" (errata)
sect264: Added illustration
sect275: Added illustration
sect278: Corrected section number
sect286: Added item class to "CB Radio"
sect289: Added item class to "Binoculars"
sect291: "turn to, 83" -> "turn to 83" (errata)
sect291: corrected link formatting
sect309: Added illustration
sect310: Replaced braces around ammo info with parenthesis.
sect310: Added item class to "Compass", "Flexible Saw", "Signal Flare"
sect314: Added item class to "Solar Regulator"
sect320: Added item class to "HE Grenade"
sect324: Added illustration
sect332: Added item class to "Binoculars"
sect348: Added illustration
o Map of Western Texas - Added
o Action Chart - Added
o Combat Rules Summary - Added
- Added missing period after "total" (errata)
- "cross-refer" -> "cross reference" (errata)
o Combat Results Table - Added
o Random Number Table - Added
o Errata - Added
o Footnotes - Added
o Table of Illustrations - Added
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