[projectaon] Re: Freeway Warrior 4 - California Countdown XML
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 09 Dec 2005 11:13:43 +0000
Hi Iain
Just a couple of brief points
Iain Smith wrote:
It didn't take as long as I expected. I've added the XML file to CVS. I
haven't made a
complete list of changes this time since there were far too many changes. I
have,
however, compiled a list of errata, footnotes and concerns:
sect51: "1 Pistol" -> "One Pistol" (errata - consistency)
Shouldn't this just read "Pistol"?
There's an awful lot of typos in this book, I notice!
sect111: Should the weapon item checks include the CCS bonus to identify them
as weapons
as in section 22? i.e. "Hammer (2)", "Baseball Bat (2)", "Fire Axe (3)"
Personally, I think that might just be confusing.
sect125: "frustratedly" isn't a true word. Should this be replaced with
"frustrated",
i.e. "'It's no good,' you say, frustrated."
or "in frustration"?
sect150: "gullys" vs "gulleys" (again)
PA has opted for"gulley" in every instance, for consistency.
sect171: "gunsmoke" is not a true word, leave as is, or replace with "gun smoke" ??
In Book 1 (way back) Section 38 we altered woodsmoke to wood smoke.
Phew!
--
Simon Osborne
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