I dubiously agree with this one - I'm not sure it adds much, but it does read
better.
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fourth paragraph:
"a radiant crystal sphere with hundreds of glowing facets set upon a slim
silver rod. > a radiant crystal sphere with hundreds of glowing facets, set
upon a slim silver rod."
This might be another borderline case, but the comma seems necessary to
indicate that the sphere itself is set upon the rod rather than just the facets?
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