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From: SJ karota1334@xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 00:08:54 on Thursday, May 6, 2021
Subject: Shadow on the Sand - Section 294
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fourth paragraph:
"a radiant crystal sphere with hundreds of glowing facets set upon a slim
silver rod. > a radiant crystal sphere with hundreds of glowing facets, set
upon a slim silver rod."
This might be another borderline case, but the comma seems necessary to
indicate that the sphere itself is set upon the rod rather than just the facets?
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