[projectaon] Re: Spellchecked 25totw

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Sat, 17 Jan 2009 18:41:34 +0000

Ingo Kloecker wrote:

On Saturday 17 January 2009, Simon Osborne wrote:

Oh, good grief . . . ;-)

Ingo Kloecker wrote:

21votm 179: and the engine sputters into life.

OK as-is.


Looking for >splutter<...
02smr 290: your engine begins to splutter and backfire.
03toz 183: the engine starts to cough and splutter.

OK as-is.


03toz 106: the engine coughs and splutters into life.

OK as-is
There's a slight inconsistency here between the engine in 21votm and the engines in 02smr and 03toz. But maybe engines in the world of Lone Wolf sputter while engines in the world of Cal Phoenix splutter. :-) 

Whoops!
OK, I've fixed the issue in Book 21 as well. Thanks for making it very clear; I really am a bit slow at the minute. :-\ 

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Simon Osborne
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