[projectaon] Re: That Time of the Year
- From: "O'Toole, Laurence (2000)" <Laurence.OToole.2000@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: "projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx" <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 29 Dec 2011 23:16:11 +0000
Hi all,
> http://www.projectaon.org/en/pdf/misc/Project_Aon_Annual_Report_2011.pdf
A few virtually insignificant things on this.
Intro (?):
January 1 2000 -> 1 January 2000
(or -> January 1st 2000)
December 31 2000 -> 31 December 2000
(or -> December 31st 2000)
ERRATA SPRINTS:
Slowly, we continued through the months -> Slowly, we continued through the
months
(Maybe. I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say here.)
WEBSITE & EXPERIMENTATION:
As far as the look and feel of the books goes -> As far as the look and feel of
the books go
NEW VERSIONS:
It has also proved to be extremely useful for editing purposes, to have all the
text displayed on one page. -> It has also proved to be extremely useful, for
editing purposes, to have all the text displayed on one page.
(Or remove the comma already there.)
PDF:
Newsletters #10 -> Newsletters 10
(Consistency with all other number in the same section.)
all the Lone Wolf released books (1–24) -> all the released Lone Wolf books
(1–24)
FINANCIAL INFORMATION:
Figures like this usually look better if the digits (but not the currency
symbol) are right-aligned. That way, like appears above/below like.
Summary (?):
Both as a group and as individuals, “The Aon Project” look
(Should this be 'looks'?)
All in all though, this is a good report, and I join the others in saying
'thank you' and 'well done' to Simon for writing it.
Cerulean
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