Hi Laurence On 29/12/2011 23:16, O'Toole, Laurence (2000) wrote:
Hi all,http://www.projectaon.org/en/pdf/misc/Project_Aon_Annual_Report_2011.pdfA few virtually insignificant things on this. Intro (?): January 1 2000 -> 1 January 2000 (or -> January 1st 2000) December 31 2000 -> 31 December 2000 (or -> December 31st 2000)
Yeah, fixed.
ERRATA SPRINTS: Slowly, we continued through the months -> Slowly, we continued through the months (Maybe. I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say here.)
Altered the wording to: "As each week passed, more of these troublesome problems were fixed. We paused..."
WEBSITE& EXPERIMENTATION: As far as the look and feel of the books goes -> As far as the look and feel of the books go
Fixed.
NEW VERSIONS: It has also proved to be extremely useful for editing purposes, to have all the text displayed on one page. -> It has also proved to be extremely useful, for editing purposes, to have all the text displayed on one page. (Or remove the comma already there.)
Altered the wording to: "Having all the text displayed on one page has also proved to be extremely useful for editing purposes."
PDF: Newsletters #10 -> Newsletters 10 (Consistency with all other number in the same section.) all the Lone Wolf released books (1–24) -> all the released Lone Wolf books (1–24)
Fixed.
FINANCIAL INFORMATION: Figures like this usually look better if the digits (but not the currency symbol) are right-aligned. That way, like appears above/below like. Summary (?): Both as a group and as individuals, “The Aon Project” look (Should this be 'looks'?)
No; it's implicit that "The Aon Project" is made up of a number of individuals. I think that's how we've edited the plural-vs.-singular stuff in the books? ;-)
All in all though, this is a good report, and I join the others in saying 'thank you' and 'well done' to Simon for writing it.
Glad to know it's appreciated. As I said, I was surprised by how much was achieved this year, so I'm glad to have compiled this. And there may be a few more bits to come...maybe...
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