On 28/03/2014 21:33, Jonathan Blake wrote:
~~~~~ (er) 96, 119: the distant corridor -> the distant corridors ~~~~~ This seems to have already been corrected (?) and I agree with this change.
(See also parallel sections 41, 203: "distant corridors" as to why this was altered.)
~~~~~~ (er) 122, 187, 235: Kirusami -> kirusami [also: foreign (er)] ~~~~~~ Agreed.
All fixed. Kept it capitalised when it is referring to a Weapon you are carrying (even though you are told to record it as a Chai Spear).
In the same vein: (??) 187, 237(x2): Ang'sei -> ang'sei
Fixed 187 and the first instance in 237. The second is referring to a Special Item that you can take, so I left it capitalised, though italicised it.
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