[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission
- From: Thomas Wolmer <angantyr@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 17 Nov 2010 16:31:19 +0100
2010/11/17 Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>:
> On 16/11/2010 08:31, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
>>
>> The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
>> From: Jan Charvát<ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx>
>> Date: 08:31:38 on Tuesday, November 16, 2010
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>> (??) 05sots 155: To the north, a road stretches across the causeway to the
>> town of Chula, just visible on the horizon. -> To the east, a road
>> stretches across the causeway to the town of Chula, just visible on the
>> horizon. [jc: As your are looking from the south wall, you simply won't be
>> able to look to the north. (Compare with the Map)]
>>
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> Surely, "To the south..." would be more appropriate, in view of the line of
> the road crossing the dry salt bed?
No, Chula lies to the east, and the road to Chula crosses (in a
slightly twist manner) the northern part of Lake Inrahim on said
causeway.
Actually, why does it say "the causeway" when the causeway hasn't been
introduced yet? "a causeway" would be better.
--
Thomas
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