[projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission
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- Date: Wed, 7 Jun 2006 09:26:52 -0700 (PDT)
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From: Andre Davidson <andre.davidson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: 16:26:52 on Wednesday, June 7, 2006
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(??) 17tdoi tssf: develop your innate Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp the
fundamental secrets -> develop your innate Grand Master Disciplines and grasp
the fundamental secrets [ad: I don't believe that comma should be there since
what follows after it is a sentence fragment and not something that can stand
alone as a sentence.]
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