[projectaon] Re: Highway Holocaust XML Changes

  • From: Iain Smith <iainsmith@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Wed, 7 Dec 2005 02:36:40 -0800 (PST)

Jon,
I've checked the diff list between your version of 01HH and my previous 
version.  Most of
the changes are straightforward and can be implemented in the remaining books 
easy
enough.  A couple of concerns though:

Replaced "pick a O" with "pick a 0"
I my copies of each of the FW books, the original text definitely has this down 
as a
capital "O" rather than the number zero.  This only really stands out because 
there are
o's and zeros nearby.  I'm not sure if it really needs to be errata though, 
it's only a
relatively minor change.

"Map of Central Texas", etc.
After thinking about it, I actually don't think that these should be in the 
errata list. 
It's not really an error in the books, its more a style change when shifting to 
HTML.  If
you agree I'll leave the capitalilised "The" in the text where the link to the 
map is
used, but remove the entry from the errata page.

Tables:
Is everyone happy with using the HTML table tags in the XML source?  I would 
have thought
that a more flexible approach would be to use generic terms in the XML and 
replace these
with HTML tags in the XSL file.  Just a thought, I'll be fine with it if 
everyone else is
happy.

Character Entities:
I'll go ahead and replace these in the XML of the other books as I find 
instances.

Lost Changes:
In your version of the XML it seems that some of the fixes I applied to the 
previous
version have been undone.  Namely the paragraphs in the survival skills section 
and the
misplaced periods in the Errata section.  I'll reintroduce these fixes into my 
current
version of the file and check that they get back in the next time I submit 
changes.

I've built up a list of pending concerns that I have, I'll hopefully get them 
posted
later today so that we can have a good-old argument about them.  I've still not 
tackled
and grammar issues, since my grammar leaves a lot to be desired. :)

Iain.


                
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