[projectaon] Omission
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From: Kayvohn Kayvohn@xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 11:21:41 on Thursday, June 22, 2006
Subject: Omission
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Hello again. At the start of the fourth Greystar book (War of the Wizards)
there's an odd sentence which feels as though there's a missing word:
"Then the leader of the rebel Freedom Guild, Sado of the Long Knife, enlisted
your aid in freeing the city of Karnali from the rule of its Shadakine Wytch
and her warriors, but you did not,"
You did not what, exactly?
It sounds like the sentence ought to read "but you did not stay," or something
to that effect.
Cheers,
Kayvohn
'Blessed is the giver, richer through the giving of a gift,'
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