[projectaon] Voyage of the Monstone Playtest (Part II)
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 22 Apr 2009 16:24:56 +0100
Hi
Here's what I spotted in the numbered sections:
Fixed (and the /test/ version updated):
(er) 17: tavern keeper's -> tavern-keeper's
(er) 53, 141, 168, 326: nerve-racking -> nerve-wracking
(er) 104: points). -> points.)
(er) 285: 'Quick men!' -> 'Quick, men!'
(er) 285: lieutenant, 'follow -> lieutenant. 'Follow
(ne) 67: you by to -> you try to
(ne) 146, 336: arid hill county -> arid hill country
(ne) 275: Delete duplicated superfluous "To the east it" statement.
Escalated:
**(er) 36, 105: master Kai -> Master Kai
**(er) 116: grey haired -> grey-haired
**(er) 127: naivety -> naïveté
**(er) 136, 170, 244, 322, 345: If you possess Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 3 to the number you
have picked -> If you possess Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, remember to add 3 to the number you have
picked [so: This is not an extra bonus, merely a reminder of the rules, I think.]
**(er) 142 [x2], 152, 219, 282, 323: mhaktis [foreign xml:lang="x-vassagonian"?]
**(er) 165: he says -> Fernant says [see the context]
**(er) 175: chamber of the font -> Chamber of the Font
**(er) 179: Grand Huntmastery and Telegnosis [<em>and</em> as per previous
books]
**(er) 242, 249: Flomi -> flomi [??]
**(er) 275: the great range -> the Great Masourn Range [??]
**(er) 314: sight like -> sight, like
<http://www.projectaon.org/en/Errata/VoyageOfTheMoonstone>
Hooray! We might get this book published this month! (And if things seem to have stagnated, please
remember that we're working on the first book of a new 'series', which always takes longer as we
make decisions on how to display things, particularly in the Game Rules section.)
--
Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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