On Wednesday 22 April 2009, Simon Osborne wrote: > Hi > > Here's what I spotted in the numbered sections: > > Fixed (and the /test/ version updated): > > (er) 17: tavern keeper's -> tavern-keeper's > (er) 53, 141, 168, 326: nerve-racking -> nerve-wracking I think this should be reverted (also in lw22 and lw23). According to http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/nerve-racking "nerve-racking" is perfectly alright with "nerve-wracking" being a variant. And my Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary mentions only "nerve-racking", but not "nerve-wracking". > (er) 104: points). -> points.) > (er) 285: 'Quick men!' -> 'Quick, men!' > (er) 285: lieutenant, 'follow -> lieutenant. 'Follow > > (ne) 67: you by to -> you try to > (ne) 146, 336: arid hill county -> arid hill country > (ne) 275: Delete duplicated superfluous "To the east it" statement. > > Escalated: > > **(er) 36, 105: master Kai -> Master Kai I disagree, master Osborne. :-) (Or would you actually write "Master Osborne" in proper English?) > **(er) 116: grey haired -> grey-haired Yes. There are several precedences for this. > **(er) 127: naivety -> naïveté I agree (as do my Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary and Merriam-Webster Online). > **(er) 136, 170, 244, 322, 345: If you possess Grand Weaponmastery > with Bow, add 3 to the number you have picked -> If you possess Grand > Weaponmastery with Bow, remember to add 3 to the number you have > picked [so: This is not an extra bonus, merely a reminder of the > rules, I think.] I agree. > **(er) 175: chamber of the font -> Chamber of the Font I'd say leave as-is. Or is there any indication that "Chamber of the Font" is the proper name of this room? > **(er) 242, 249: Flomi -> flomi [??] I agree. We do not capitalize names of animals (cf. our Manual of Style). > **(er) 275: the great range -> the Great Masourn Range [??] I don't think "the great range" refers to the Great Masourn Range. It is unlikely that you can see the Great Masourn Range behind the Koneshi Mountains from the junction. I think "the great range" refers to the Koneshi Mountains that lie beyond the "gentle foothills of the Koneshi Mountains". Regards, Ingo ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at http://www.freelists.org/list/projectaon