[projectaon] Re: 28thos errata

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Mon, 03 Mar 2014 14:12:27 +0000

I've not been updating the test area versions online, only the source xml. There hasn't been much call for it. I've updated the xhtml, less-simple, and simple versions of Book 28 in the test area, so the changes can now be reviewed more easily.


Hope it helps!

--
Simon Osborne
Project Aon

On 03/03/2014 13:48, Benjamin Krefetz wrote:
I'm looking in http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/28thos/ and
not seeing these changes reflected.  Have they not been uploaded to the
test area yet, or is there somewhere else I should be looking?

Ben


On Mon, Mar 3, 2014 at 8:39 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx
<mailto:outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>> wrote:

    On 28/02/2014 22:10, Simon Osborne wrote:

        On 28/02/2014 00:18, Jonathan Blake wrote:

            (er)    18:    one of the two remaining monsters -> one of the
            monsters [lm: There are still three of them on this path]

            Agreed.


        Resolved--a nice easy one.


    Or maybe it wasn't.


    Jon Blake wrote:

        I don't remember any of the monsters having been killed in sections
        109 and 18. Are we assuming that one may have been? Did I miss
        something?


    Good point. OK, also removed the word 'remaining'.



            (er)    22:    Halt Missile [lm: The spell described in this
            section
            is Invisible Shield]

            If we switch this to Invisible Shield, then we should also
            be able to
            do the following:

            (er) 92: Kai-alchemy and have attained the rank of Sun
            Knight, ->
            Kai-alchemy,

            The other alternative for 22 is to change the description of
            what
            happens to match the description of Halt Missile which
            "causes any
            projected or hurled missile ... to cease its flight and remain
            stationary in mid-air."

            Also related:

            (??) 215: Invisible Shield -> Shield

            Shield is the Old Kingdom version of Invisible Shield.


        Er, if I understand correctly, the changes to 22 and 92 change
        the least
        and are therefore the most desirable. I vote for those.

        Irrespective of what we decide, the proposed change definitely
        needs to
        be made to 215. Right? Magi-magic vs. Kai-alchemy is not one of my
        specialities! ;-)


    OK, made those changes, with the following amendments:

    * In Section 92, I replaced 'and have attained the Kai rank of Sun
    Knight' with 'and wish to use it' as it is not a compulsory option.

    * Also in Section 92 , I deleted the phrase 'or if you have yet to
    attain the required level of Kai mastery' as it is no longer relevant.

    Explanation and reasoning is briefly covered in the Errata entry for
    Section 92.


    --
    Simon Osborne
    Project Aon


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