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The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form From: Jan Charvát <ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx> Date: 08:23:15 on Friday, January 30, 2009 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (er) 08tjoh 336: 'Have you eaten?' -> 'Have they eaten?' [jc: Both Lone Wolf and Paido have eaten the poisoned food] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is a brief discussion and so nothing is being sent to the original poster yet.At first, I thought this unnecessary, but after looking at the parallel sections, I now think this should definitely be changed. In Sections 174 and 217 he says: "Has the Vakeros eaten?" and not "Have you eaten?" It seems very odd that the Gnaag Helghast be asking after the welfare of the monks!
Still, this change could be contentious enough that I'd like feedback. (I know we're working on Wolf's Bane, but this is such a little one-off proposal that I'm sure y'all can fit it into your busy schedules. ;-) )
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