[projectaon] Re: Final Call for Wolf's Bane Pre-readers
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 30 Jan 2009 15:27:50 -0800
On Thu, Jan 29, 2009 at 2:28 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> The end of the month is fast approaching, and if we want to prevent
> ourselves from falling behind schedule with releases this year we will
> likely be releasing Wolf's Bane this weekend or Monday (subject to Jon's
> ultimate decision, of course!), so now is an ideal time to playtest/pre-read
> the book with a view to spotting any errors.
>
> The current version is here:
> <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/19wb/title.htm> All known issues
> are fixed in this edition, and all graphics are present.
acknwldg: Have we made sure that the acknowledgments are up-to-date? :)
tssf: For ten unbroken years peace -> For ten unbroken years, peace
170: centrifugal pull -> centripetal pull
174: The illustration seems out of place. It fits in 31, later in the
story, where it is also currently placed.
182: I don't believe that it's necessarily true that Lone Wolf
encountered Crypt Spawn in the Graveyard of the Ancients. This isn't
terribly important to our work, but I wonder if this is also true for
the new Flight from the Dark.
That's all I found. :)
--
Jon
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