On 20/04/2009 08:06, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
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From: Jan Charvát
Date: 07:06:55 on Monday, April 20, 2009
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(er) 05sots 101: You hold your breath and twist the dial! -> You hold your
breath and twist the dial. [jc: Is the exclamation necessary? ]
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Hi Jan As David said, the exclamation point is to invoke a sense of urgency here. I think it works. ;-)Off-topic: I've mad a minor modification to your map for Book 21 so that there is no "off-set" between the upper and lower sections of the "scroll". I hope this is OK. Since it was an easy edit to make, it seemed better to do it myself rather than ask you to make the minor change. ;-)
You can see the new version of your map that we plan to use here: <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/21votm/maplarge.htm>
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