[projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission
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From: Matthew harper <mjharper@xxxxxxx>
Date: 20:02:47 on Monday, June 5, 2006
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(ne) 12tmod 200: the 7eacute;lite of the Drakkarim -> the elite of the
Drakkarim [mh: I know that's wrong! Confused html]
(??) 12tmod 226: The black tendril retreats... [mh: I'm wondering if there's
some text missing. The paragraph leading here (315) only said that something
was rising, and asked if you wanted to get reading. Then in this paragraph the
text assumes that the reader has already encountered the blak tendril. Compare
with 103, another choice from 315: in that case the tendril is introduced at
the start of 103. I don't have the book to check, but there seems to be
something amiss here.]
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