[projectaon] Tabletop Heroes - 2 issues.
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From: Cerulean l.otoole@xxxxxxxxxx
Date: 23:39:58 on Monday, August 11, 2008
Subject: Tabletop Heroes - 2 issues.
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Hi all,
So after many weeks of offline back and forth, Simon and I have come to a
consensus on just about every errartum in the Tabletop Heroes articles. The
document can be found here:
http://www.projectaon.org/en/Main/JoeDeversTabletopHeroesArticles
Unfortunately, there are two points where we have reached an impasse so I
wanted to throw them out to the list to see if anyone had any opinions either
way.
(First issue)
Page 36, first column, second paragraph:
One general photographic principle is that the greater the distance between
lens and subject the greater the depth of field[.] -> One general phogotraphic
principle is: the greater the distance between lens and subject the greater the
depth of field[.]
I just can't get this sentence to read properly with the word 'that' in it.
(Second issue)
Page 50, first column, second paragraph:
They are, however, dearer than Student's colours. -> They are, however, dearer
than Student's Colours.
(Or -> They are, however, dearer than student's colours.)
Earlier in the paragraph, the two standards are called "Artist's Oil Colours
and Student's Oil Colours". The use of capitals seems inconsistent to me.
Simon thinks the original is fine in both cases. Any thoughts?
Cerulean
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