[projectaon] Re: Tabletop Heroes - 2 issues.
- From: jffdougan@xxxxxxxxxxx
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- Date: Wed, 13 Aug 2008 12:43:01 +0000
I'm with Simon on the first and have no opinion on the second.
JD
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> Subject: Tabletop Heroes - 2 issues.
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> Hi all,
>
> So after many weeks of offline back and forth, Simon and I have come to a
> consensus on just about every errartum in the Tabletop Heroes articles. The
> document can be found here:
> http://www.projectaon.org/en/Main/JoeDeversTabletopHeroesArticles
>
> Unfortunately, there are two points where we have reached an impasse so I
> wanted
> to throw them out to the list to see if anyone had any opinions either way.
>
>
> (First issue)
> Page 36, first column, second paragraph:
> One general photographic principle is that the greater the distance between
> lens
> and subject the greater the depth of field[.] -> One general phogotraphic
> principle is: the greater the distance between lens and subject the greater
> the
> depth of field[.]
>
> I just can't get this sentence to read properly with the word 'that' in it.
>
>
> (Second issue)
> Page 50, first column, second paragraph:
> They are, however, dearer than Student's colours. -> They are, however,
> dearer
> than Student's Colours.
> (Or -> They are, however, dearer than student's colours.)
>
> Earlier in the paragraph, the two standards are called "Artist's Oil Colours
> and
> Student's Oil Colours". The use of capitals seems inconsistent to me.
>
>
> Simon thinks the original is fine in both cases. Any thoughts?
>
> Cerulean
>
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