[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 01:31:33 +0000

Jonathan Blake wrote:

On Fri, Jan 30, 2009 at 1:00 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
  From: Jan Charvát <ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx>
  Date: 08:23:15 on Friday, January 30, 2009

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(er) 08tjoh 336: 'Have you eaten?' -> 'Have they eaten?' [jc: Both Lone
Wolf and Paido have eaten the poisoned food]


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This is a brief discussion and so nothing is being sent to the original
poster yet.

At first, I thought this unnecessary, but after looking at the parallel
sections, I now think this should definitely be changed. In Sections 174 and
217 he says: "Has the Vakeros eaten?" and not "Have you eaten?" It seems
very odd that the Gnaag Helghast be asking after the welfare of the monks!


How odd! Just so I'm clear, which are we going with? "Have they
eaten?" or "Has the Vakeros eaten?"?
In Section 336, both you and Paido have eaten the monks' food; in the parallel sections (174 and 217), only Paido has eaten it. So, in 336 the proposal is to change "Have you eaten" to "Have they eaten". That seems the best fix. 

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Simon Osborne
Project Aon

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