[projectaon] Re: Errors: Ten of the Jungle
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Mon, 13 Oct 2008 17:33:52 +0100
Benjamin I Krefetz wrote:
On Mon, 13 Oct 2008, Simon Osborne wrote:
(er) 242: If you possess any of these Special Items and wish to
swap it -> eliminate the final 'it' because the antecedent 'any' does
not necessarily refer to a single Item [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007]
First of all, the page currently has 'swap' misspelled as 'swop'. So
how about "swop it" -> "swap one"?
Yeah, the swop -> swap change has already been in the XML for some time. ;-)
Maybe "...swap one of them for the Grey Crystal Ring" ? I don't know if all that extra text is
strictly necessary, though.
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Simon Osborne
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