[projectaon] Re: Errors: Ten of the Jungle
- From: "OToole L" <L.OToole@xxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2008 18:23:47 +0100
>>24: Consult the map at the front of the book before
>>making your decision. -> Remove "at the front of the
>>book"
>Good call. Fixed in XML.
Perhaps a global search across all books is in order to see if this
phrase is hanging around anywhere else.
>>>(ft) 60: If you possess the Sommerswerd
>>>[jfs: Turn to this number if you possess a magical
>>>weapon such as the Magic Spear, the Dagger of Vashna,
>>>or the Jewelled Mace. But do not apply the bonuses
>>>related to the Sommerswerd detailed in that section.
>>>Note: For consistency with "The Captives of Kaag",
>>>in which, you can combat a Helghast with the Jewelled
>>>Mace or the Dagger of Vashna (section 12 -> 330).]
>>Maybe a footnote?
>Actually, this has already been fixed in the /test/
>area--D'oh! See
><http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/08tjoh/sect60.htm>
>and
><http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/08tjoh/sect308.htm>
I don't like the "such as" in the footnote to Section 60. It implies
that there could be other things (besides the Dagger of Vashna, the
Jewelled Mace, and the Magic Spear) with which one could fight the
Helghast.
Cerulean
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