[projectaon] Re: New Order Grand Weaponmastery text
- From: "Jonathan Blake" <blake.jon@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 29 Aug 2008 06:31:45 -0700
On Fri, Aug 29, 2008 at 6:05 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Ingo Kloecker wrote:
>
>> "For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order
>> series [possessing/knowing/mastering/having the discipline of Grand
>> Weaponmastery], you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon."
>
> That's much better than my proposal, sure. Cheers! Escalated to Jon.
"For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order
series while possessing the discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you
will gain proficiency with one additional weapon"
Notice the "while" which I think puts the finishing touch on your
suggested wording, Ingo.
--
Jon
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