[projectaon] Re: Final Call for Wolf's Bane Pre-readers
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 13:46:50 +0000
Jonathan Blake wrote:
acknwldg: Have we made sure that the acknowledgments are up-to-date? :)
D'oh! They are now--in the xml, at least. I'll get decisions on all of Anders' comments before
outputting a new version.
tssf: For ten unbroken years peace -> For ten unbroken years, peace
Fixed! (This doesn't apply to other GM books.)
170: centrifugal pull -> centripetal pull
Yowzer! I had to look that one up. Fixed!
174: The illustration seems out of place. It fits in 31, later in the
story, where it is also currently placed.
Removed.
182: I don't believe that it's necessarily true that Lone Wolf
encountered Crypt Spawn in the Graveyard of the Ancients. This isn't
terribly important to our work, but I wonder if this is also true for
the new Flight from the Dark.
I don't know how to fix this! Maybe a footnote? I doubt the encounter with Crypt Spawn is enforced,
even in the new edition.
That's all I found. :)
Good, good, good! :-)
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Simon Osborne
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