> It should probably be footnoted here that buying a second backpack will not > grant another 8 slots. Unless it does? If noted, IMO it should probably be along the lines of "If you have lost your backpack you may replace it here, but may never carry more than one". ----- Original Message ---- From: "pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx" <pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Cc: dewi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx Sent: Tuesday, 26 August, 2008 8:06:44 AM Subject: [projectaon] Misc Errata The following was sent from the Project Aon contact form From: Dewi Morgan dewi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx Date: 07:06:44 on Tuesday, August 26, 2008 Subject: Misc Errata ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1) http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/02fotw/errata.htm "(126) Replaced 'Vonatar' with 'Vonotar', and 'jail' with 'goal'." - should be "with 'gaol'." 1a) However, the replacement referred to (http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/02fotw/sect126.htm) should perhaps never have been made anyway. 'Jail' is correct, and more standard British English usage. Gaol is also correct, but somewhat obsolete, and less accessible to most readers: many will assume a typo for 'goal'. 'Gaol' is used elsewhere (eg end passage of book 3), but possibly better to change that to 'jail' for consistency, I think, than the other way round. 2) http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml-simple/lw/01fftd.htm Various sections refer to "your axe", or "your Axe", (inconsistent caps), even though you may well have picked up two more weapons by then, and so discarded the axe. You can get one weapon from the random roll at the start, and also: 276, 343: refer to "your Axe", but player might instead have a Giak Spear, from 305. 228: refers to "your axe", but player might instead have a Dagger, from 267. 297: refers to "your axe", but player might instead have a Sword, from 15. Suggest replacing with "your weapon", or just omitting altogether in some cases. 3) http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/02fotw/sect181.htm It should probably be footnoted here that buying a second backpack will not grant another 8 slots. Unless it does? 4) http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/02fotw/sect168.htm Either add or remove a comma like so: "is met, by the villagers, with great suspicion," "is met by the villagers with great suspicion," 5) http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/03tcok/errata.htm "This section is reacted from" should be "This section is reached from" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ NOTE: Please remember to "Reply to All" recipients. Thank you. ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at http://www.freelists.org/list/projectaon Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger.yahoo.com