[projectaon] Re: Misc Errata
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Tue, 26 Aug 2008 18:50:08 +0100
Jonathan Blake wrote:
On Tue, Aug 26, 2008 at 7:01 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
2) http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml-simple/lw/01fftd.htm
297: refers to "your axe", but player might instead have a Sword, from 15.
Suggest replacing with "your weapon", or just omitting altogether in some
cases.
Using the SVG I downloaded some years ago, I can see that 228, 276, and 343
should be changed, but I can't see how 15 links to 297, as it appears higher
in the flowchart than 15. My initial reaction is therefore not to alter 297.
Any thoughts?
I generated a new SVG just to be safe:
http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/svg/lw/01fftd.svgz
Hey, thanks! :-)
There's a lot of circularity around 15 but I'm able to partition the
graph into two subgraphs - one including 15 and the other 297 - and
all of the edges point from the 297 subgraph to the 15 subgraph. In
other words, given our current link structure, there is no way to get
to 297 from 15.
Right. However, there is a possible path from 305 -> 297
(305-105-298-38-128-297), the same as 305 (Giak Spear) can lead to both 276 and
343. So here are my proposals:
(er) 228: your axe -> your weapon [Dewi Morgan, August 2008]
(er) 276, 343: your Axe -> your weapon [Dewi Morgan, August 2008]
(er) 297 [x2]: your axe -> your weapon [Dewi Morgan, August 2008]
Mooted Errata entries:
228: Replaced <quote>your axe</quote> with <quote>your weapon</quote>, as it is
possible you may no longer be carrying an Axe.
276, 343: Replaced <quote>your Axe</quote> with <quote>your weapon</quote>, as
it is possible you may no longer be carrying an Axe.
297: Replaced each occurrence of <quote>your axe</quote> with <quote>your
weapon</quote>, as it is possible you may no longer be carrying an Axe.
Other Possibilities:
Maybe the choice in 228 should be reworded to:
If you continue east, cutting through the vegetation with your axe (*if you are
still carrying it *), turn to 140.
Joe may have meant that. Personally, I prefer the first option (your axe -> your
weapon).
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Simon Osborne
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