[projectaon] Re: Footnotes Galore
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 5 Aug 2014 07:51:39 -0700
On Tue, Aug 5, 2014 at 3:47 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 04/08/2014 21:50, Jonathan Blake wrote:
>>
>> For The Caverns of Kalte:
>>
>> ~~~~~
>> 32: Section rewritten. Footnote incorporated into the section text. [JR]
>>
>> Add: "If you have already fought or killed any of these Kalkoth in a
>> previous section, record the damage you have already inflicted upon
>> them before commencing this battle. If the earlier combat listed only
>> two Kalkoth because you crept up on them and managed to kill one,
>> ignore Kalkoth 3 in this fight."
>>
>> That said, it's a bit long-winded. :-\
>> ~~~~~
>>
>> Agreed. Regrettably, I can't think of a better way to state this.
>
>
> OK, I simplified it the following way, adding the text to the section and
> jettisoning the footnote:
>
> "(If you have already fought or killed any of these Kalkoth, carry over to
> this battle the damage you have already inflicted upon them. If the earlier
> combat listed only two Kalkoth, ignore Kalkoth 3 in this fight.)"
>
> I think this simplifies the text and removes all extraneous information.
I agree, that's much better. Thanks, Simon.
--
Jon
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