On Sat, May 9, 2009 at 9:33 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On 08/05/2009 22:11, Jonathan Blake wrote: >>> >>> REMAINING >>> ISSUES<http://www.projectaon.org/en/Errata/VoyageOfTheMoonstone>: >>> >>> (er) Grand Master Disciplines: "you are skilled in the use of >>> one >>> of the weapons listed in the Equipment section." Are you _really_ limited >>> to >>> Quarterstaff, Bow, Dagger, Sword, or Axe? [so: How should this be >>> re-worded?] >> >> Should we add the list of weapons illustration to the Equipment >> section under the "Equipment—How to use it... Weapons" section? > > It would work, but is it the most elegant solution to the problem? I suppose > adding a sentence at the bottom of the How to Use/Weapons section that says > something like, "A Kai Grand Master might find the following Weapons during > his adventures." but worded better, and then the weapons.png illustration, > could solve this issue. Maybe. Or should we just put the weapons list in a footnote explaining the oddity of the new rules and suggesting that the reader could feel good about ignoring them? :) >>> (er) 36, 105: master Kai -> Master Kai >> >> Doing some research turns up some inconsistency in how similar >> salutations are capitalized in the books (cf. sire versus Sire). On >> balance, they favor the uncapitalized version. I don't mind going with >> that. Thoughts? > > If it said "mister Kai" we would capitalise it without question. If it is a > titular for of address, I think it probably should be capitalised. I see your point, though I'm not comfortable making a general rule yet. I would like to handle each case separately. Unless any object, let's go with Master Kai in this book. > Should we go after sire vs. Sire? >>> (er) 61: master journeyman -> Master [J]ourneyman >>> (er) 61: journeyman -> Journeyman [jb] [so: Only these, or other >>> occurrences of 'journeyman' as well?] >> >> It depends on whether the Journeyman refers to the rank or to the >> occupation. Now that I think about it again, I think we can leave this >> as-is. > > See above for master vs. Master. If Journeyman is being used as a title, it > should probably be capitalised too. All other instances should probably not > be capitalised; after all, if we substitute "carpenter" or "tailor" for > "journeyman", we wouldn't capitalise those in such instances. I think? Master Journeyman, but leave other occurrences of "journeyman" as-is. Are we only waiting on these issues and perhaps a short comment period? -- Jon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at http://www.freelists.org/list/projectaon