[projectaon] Re: Wolf's Bane Outstanding Issues
- From: Benjamin I Krefetz <krefetz@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 13 Jan 2009 11:53:12 -0500 (EST)
On Tue, 13 Jan 2009, Simon Osborne wrote:
(er) 98, 280: Having done as she requests, she -> When you have
done as she requests, she [LM]
[jb: correct as-is]
Hmm. I think I agree with LeRoy on this one. "Having done as she requests"
relates to you, but the rest of the sentence is actually all about Alyss. It
does read strangely.
My 10th grade English teacher would go into convulsions over dangling
participles if we didn't change this :)
Ben
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