On Tuesday 13 January 2009, Jonathan Blake wrote: > On Tue, Jan 13, 2009 at 3:30 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > (er) 131: incarcerated -> interred [LM] > > [jb: I'm trying to decide if this is just metaphoric speech] > > > > Doesn't seem to invoke metaphor to my ears. I think this should be > > changed. > > I'm actually leaning the other way. I'm loathe to change something > that Dever may have intended as something of a metaphor. It feels > like interfering with his artistic vision, and I don't feel a mandate > to do that. :) I'm with Jon in this matter. Regards, Ingo ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at http://www.freelists.org/list/projectaon